To improve further include more detailed examples from your product to support the points you make. Compare your finished product to the NME in relation to use of conventions, and representation. Explain why the institution you identify would produce your magazine. Discuss the skills you have developed, and compare them in relation to your main and preliminary task. Improve the presentation of your evaluation, making sure that you make the most of the blog format.
Research and Planning 14/20 Production 43/60 Evaluation 11/20
Total Marks 68/100(C)
You now need to make any further improvements to your work by the final deadline of the 7th of April. You need at least two more marks to achieve a B overall. To improve your magazine further on the front cover fill in the empty space at the top of the page, and add a few more coverlines. Make the positioning of the date/issue/price a little more ordered. On the contents page add captions to your images.
11/20 (D)
ReplyDeleteTo improve further include more detailed examples from your product to support the points you make. Compare your finished product to the NME in relation to use of conventions, and representation. Explain why the institution you identify would produce your magazine. Discuss the skills you have developed, and compare them in relation to your main and preliminary task. Improve the presentation of your evaluation, making sure that you make the most of the blog format.
Current Marks
ReplyDeleteResearch and Planning 14/20
Production 43/60
Evaluation 11/20
Total Marks 68/100(C)
You now need to make any further improvements to your work by the final deadline of the 7th of April. You need at least two more marks to achieve a B overall. To improve your magazine further on the front cover fill in the empty space at the top of the page, and add a few more coverlines. Make the positioning of the date/issue/price a little more ordered. On the contents page add captions to your images.